The POSITIVES we received are:
- Amazing titles
- Amazing transitions
- Nice link to "1984"
- Really good shots such as motorway and police scan
- Good use of music
- Realistic costumes and props
- Brilliant sound effects
- Editing is really good
- Good focus pull at hostages and at terrorist video
- Good title
- Good use of CCTV effect
- Brilliant idea/concept
- "Best one i've seen"
The NEGATIVES we received are:
- Need to change the signs as they are not very clear
- Driving a bit too slow
- Car needs to be quicker with siren
ACTION PLAN:
- We need to change the signs so that they are more readable. We are going to do this by buying a thicker card to prevent the light shining through; use a thicker black marker pen and also try and make the writing a lot neater.
- We are going to speed up the car when the sirens start as we have had feedback that "what we are hearing and what we are seeing are two different things".
