Feedback From Rough Cut

We displayed our rough cut to the rest of our peers so that they could give us feedback on what looks good, but also what we need to improve on for our final cut.

The POSITIVES we received are:
- Amazing titles
- Amazing transitions
- Nice link to "1984"
- Really good shots such as motorway and police scan
- Good use of music
- Realistic costumes and props
- Brilliant sound effects
- Editing is really good
- Good focus pull at hostages and at terrorist video
- Good title
- Good use of CCTV effect
- Brilliant idea/concept
- "Best one i've seen"

The NEGATIVES we received are:
- Need to change the signs as they are not very clear
- Driving a bit too slow
- Car needs to be quicker with siren

ACTION PLAN:

- We need to change the signs so that they are more readable. We are going to do this by buying a thicker card to prevent the light shining through; use a thicker black marker pen and also try and make the writing a lot neater.

- We are going to speed up the car when the sirens start as we have had feedback that "what we are hearing and what we are seeing are two different things".